Thursday, August 11, 2011

Is this a good start to a story?

The start is relatively goodd but instead of adding every time when you descibe how she got certain injures say " Are you alrihgt" the same question he asked since that horrible night. and use this to describe the rope injury. " he touch the cut on my wrist where the rope left that scar. its eternal reminder of what that beast had done to me." well i hope that helps

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